Thesis: Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger has signed the new 2009-10 California state budget. This new budget delegates who receives money, introduces sources of funding, and also severe budget cuts which have a great impact on a variety of citizens.
Outline:
I. Introductory Paragraph
A. Intro
1. Thesis statement
II. Body Paragraphs
A. Educational system
1. Students and raised tuition
a. Larger class sizes
2. Teachers losing jobs
a. Smaller paycheck
B. Economy and job market
1. New state programs attempt to assist our job economy
C. Higher taxes
1. New sources of state income
III. Concluding Paragraph
A. Restate thesis
1. Closing argument or statements
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There's not much here that discusses an argument or is focused enough for your essay. How can you make this topic interesting for your peers? (Avoid regurgitating our class discussions.)
ReplyDeleteHow’s your thesis, Ryan? Well, the outline certainly made it look like thesis writing is just a piece of cake for you. It’s actually good to properly have an outline of it early on. That way, it would be easy to write the paper.
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